When we presented out Short Film Idea we asked for feedback about how we could improve our idea.
We didn't get too much feedback on our idea so we took on the feedback that we got from the people we presented too but we also looked at it critically our selves so that we could develop it as much as possible and make it the best we could.
FEEDBACK FROM PEERS:
Make sure it's not too long
When I was given this feedback, I read back over the story synopsis and realised that the film could be very drawn out. So to tackle this, when writing the script I will be careful to not make it to long or drawn out. As long as I get to the point across about what's going on, it doesn't have to be any longer. I will make effective use of sound and camera to get across themes, feelings and emotions.
Don't make it too gory
We had already decided before we presented our idea to limit the amount of blood etc that would be seen after Mike is hit by a car. We wanted to keep the age rating down and get more views. Not many people want to see loads and loads of gore. We should have made this clearer in the presentation.
Make sure people know that the couple are together at the beginning because it might not be obvious if they are just hanging around the town.
It is important to the story line that the audience realise that the couple are together. When they are in the town we plan to have them holding hands etc so that people can see that they are more than just friends. Hopefully we will manage to make it look like a date.
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